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| hero(es)= [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny Everywhere]]
| hero(es)= [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny Everywhere]]
| villain(s)= [[Witch of the Blue Hills|The Witch of the Blue Hills]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Centaur of the Crossroads|The Centaur of the Crossroads]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small>
| villain(s)= [[Witch of the Blue Hills|The Witch of the Blue Hills]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Centaur of the Crossroads|The Centaur of the Crossroads]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small>
| featuring= [[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]]<br>[[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere]]<br>[[David Lowe]]<br>[[Willow (Pit Stop)|Willow]]<br>[[Wu (Pit Stop)|Wu]]<br>[[Professor Awesome]]<br>[[Prince Guy]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Mordorak of the Nine Noses]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Morrie (Pit Stop)|Morrie]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Wizard (Pit Stop)|Unnamed wizard]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Mr Hernandez]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Eric's mother]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Robot cat]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small>
| featuring= [[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]]<br>[[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere]]<br>[[David Lowe]]<br>[[Willow (Pit Stop)|Willow]]<br>[[Wu (Pit Stop)|Wu]]<br>[[Professor Awesome]]<br>[[Prince Guy]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Mordorak of the Nine Noses]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Morrie (Pit Stop)|Morrie]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Steven Lucas]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Mr Hernandez]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Eric's mother]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Robot cat]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small><br>[[Glamdalf the Fabulous]]<br><small>(mentioned)</small>
| setting= [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny Everywhere]]'s apartment, [[Universe (Parallax)|unnamed universe]]
| setting= [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny Everywhere]]'s apartment, [[Universe (Parallax)|unnamed universe]]
| length= 3 chapters<br><small>(ongoing)</small>
| length= 3 chapters<br><small>(ongoing)</small>
| writer(s)= [[Scott Sanford]]
| writer(s)= [[Scott Sanford]]
| artist(s)=
| artist(s)=
| dates= October 15th - October 22nd, 2021
| dates= October 15th - November 6th, 2021
| original_link= [https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/43570.html]<br>[https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/43816.html]<br>[https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/44072.html]
| original_link= [https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/43570.html]<br>[https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/43816.html]<br>[https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/44072.html]<br>[https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/44388.html]
| seriesnav = [[Scott Sanford]] stories
| seriesnav = [[Scott Sanford]] stories
| previous  = ''[[Awakening (short story)|Awakening]]''
| previous  = ''[[Awakening (short story)|Awakening]]''
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====Part 3====
====Part 3====
After selecting the right tools, [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] and [[Professor Awesome|Eric]] head back to the parking lot to find [[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]] back. Kim is curious as to why Eric isn't at school, and he and Jenny explain that he was sent home early for bringing dozens of live [[trilobite]]s to school for science class (having collected them from [[Universe (Pit Stop)|a parallel world]] with Jenny's own help). Examining the [[dream spinner]], Eric readily identifies the issue, proving more familiar with how [[dimensional shift engine]]s than even Jenny thought he was; he promises that he can fix it in fifteen minutes with a Dremel tool.
After selecting the right tools, [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] and [[Professor Awesome|Eric]] head back to the parking lot to find [[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]] back. Kim is curious as to why Eric isn't at school, and he and Jenny explain that he was sent home early for bringing dozens of live [[trilobite]]s to school for science class (having collected them from [[Universe (Pit Stop)|a parallel world]] with Jenny's own help). Examining the [[dream spinner]], Eric readily identifies the issue, proving more familiar with how [[dimensional shift engine]]s than even Jenny thought he was; he promises that he can fix it in fifteen minutes with a Dremel tool.
 
====Part 4====
[[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]] and [[Professor Awesome]] successfully repair or replace the [[dream spinner]]'s mechanical parts, with [[Wu (Pit Stop)|Wu]]'s help (discussing the “multi-Shifter event” as they work); however, they are dumbfounded by the magical elements of the contraption. They get to discussing what wizards they could contact if necessary, but [[Willow (Pit Stop)|Willow]] soon reports that the runes are in working order already, meaning [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere|Genevieve]] and her party are all set. [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] cheerfully notes that she has a few hours free before she's set to see an [[Anorak Boys]] performance to review it.
===Worldbuilding===
===Worldbuilding===
====Jenny Everywhere====
====Jenny Everywhere====
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*Also prominently featured is [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere]], as previously seen in ''Paying It Forward''. She arrives on Jenny and Kim's doorstep “wearing an improbably pink and frilly dress” with a matching lace ruffle; she wears “a tiara set with crystals, glinting even in indoor light”, and has as a side-kick a raccoon wearing a doublet. She has a certain [[Prince Guy]] as a companion and as a love interest, although she is unsure whether he is “her true love” precisely. It is revealed that she travels through the realms using a device called [[dream spinner]], rather than [[shift]]ing through her own powers.
*Also prominently featured is [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere]], as previously seen in ''Paying It Forward''. She arrives on Jenny and Kim's doorstep “wearing an improbably pink and frilly dress” with a matching lace ruffle; she wears “a tiara set with crystals, glinting even in indoor light”, and has as a side-kick a raccoon wearing a doublet. She has a certain [[Prince Guy]] as a companion and as a love interest, although she is unsure whether he is “her true love” precisely. It is revealed that she travels through the realms using a device called [[dream spinner]], rather than [[shift]]ing through her own powers.
====Universes====
====Universes====
*The story's [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|main Jenny]] lives in [[Universe (Parallax)|one universe]], and [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere|Genevieve]] is native to [[Universe E (Paying It Forward)|another]]; although magic is more common-place in the latter, it is mentioned that there is [[Wizard (Pit Stop)|a wizard]] who lives in the same building that houses the modern-day Jenny's apartment.
*The story's [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|main Jenny]] lives in [[Universe (Parallax)|one universe]], and [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere|Genevieve]] is native to [[Universe E (Paying It Forward)|another]]; although magic is more common-place in the latter, it is mentioned that there is [[Steven Lucas|a wizard]] who lives in the same building that houses the modern-day Jenny's apartment.
*Shortly before the events of the story, [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] took [[Professor Awesome|Eric]] to [[Universe (Pit Stop)|a universe]] where large populations of [[trilobite]]s, some of them terrestrial, survive into the modern day.
*Shortly before the events of the story, [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] took [[Professor Awesome|Eric]] to [[Universe (Pit Stop)|a universe]] where large populations of [[trilobite]]s, some of them terrestrial, survive into the modern day.
====Other ====
====Other ====
* The [[Witch of the Blue Hills]] commands a “pack of flaming [[dog-monkey]]s” and the [[Centaur of the Crossroads]].
* The [[Witch of the Blue Hills]] commands a “pack of flaming [[dog-monkey]]s” and the [[Centaur of the Crossroads]].
* The only [[Wizard (Pit Stop)|wizard]] in the acquaintance of [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] and [[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]] is on vacation in [[Orlando]].
* The only reliable wizard in the acquaintance of [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] and [[Kim (Parallax)|Kim]] is a Mr [[Steven Lucas]], currently on vacation in [[Orlando]]. He claims that he “needs to ‘commune with the spheres,’ which means going to the [[Space Coast]] and astrally projecting into a satellite”, although Kim suspects it's just a cover story so he can go to [[Walt Disney World|Disney World]].
* [[Mordorak of the Nine Noses]] lives “upon a cloud in a dreamland, three leagues past [[Atlantis]]”.
* [[Mordorak of the Nine Noses]] lives “upon a cloud in a dreamland, three leagues past [[Atlantis]]”.
* A month before the events of the story, [[Wu (Pit Stop)|Wu]] apparently had an unpleasant experience with a [[gnome]] mechanic during an adventure related to [[gnome wrestling]].
* A month before the events of the story, [[Wu (Pit Stop)|Wu]] apparently had an unpleasant experience with a [[gnome]] mechanic during an adventure related to [[gnome wrestling]].
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*This story features [[Professor Awesome]] (whose civilian name is revealed to be “Eric”), following his mention early on in [[PROSE]]: ''[[Paying It Forward (novel)|Paying It Forward]]''. The [[De-pants-icator]] is mentioned.
*This story features [[Professor Awesome]] (whose civilian name is revealed to be “Eric”), following his mention early on in [[PROSE]]: ''[[Paying It Forward (novel)|Paying It Forward]]''. The [[De-pants-icator]] is mentioned.
* Talking about [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere|Genevieve]]'s [[Void Ship]], [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] says that it's “not exactly the ''[[Lotus Prime]]''”. [[COMIC]]: ''[[Makeshift Multiverse (comic story)|Makeshift Multiverse]]'', one of the original [[Barbelith Stories]], featured several Jennies crewing the ''Lotus Prime'', which was stated to be “the most advanced ship in the Multiverse”.
* Talking about [[Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere|Genevieve]]'s [[Void Ship]], [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]] says that it's “not exactly the ''[[Lotus Prime]]''”. [[COMIC]]: ''[[Makeshift Multiverse (comic story)|Makeshift Multiverse]]'', one of the original [[Barbelith Stories]], featured several Jennies crewing the ''Lotus Prime'', which was stated to be “the most advanced ship in the Multiverse”.
* [[Jenny Everywhere#Kim's friend|Jenny]]'s job as a music critic, first seen in [[PROSE]]: ''[[Camera Shy (short story)|Camera Shy]]'', is featured once again.
==Behind the scenes ==
==Behind the scenes ==
===Background===
===Background===
[[Professor Awesome]]'s schoolteacher is named [[Mr Hernandez]], in reference to [[Alex Hernandez]], a prolific writer of early [[Jenny Everywhere]] comic stories.
[[Professor Awesome]]'s schoolteacher is named [[Mr Hernandez]], in reference to [[Alex Hernandez]], a prolific writer of early [[Jenny Everywhere]] comic stories. The [[Moriarty guide]]s are named in reference to the screen handle of [[Steven Wintle]] on the [[Barbelith]] forum.  
===Read online===
===Read online===
The story is [https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/43570.html available] on the author's website.  
The story is [https://scott-sanford.dreamwidth.org/43570.html available] on the author's website.  

Revision as of 13:50, 6 November 2021

Pit Stop is a Jenny Everywhere webnovel serialised weekly by Scott Sanford starting in mid-October 2021.

Contents

Plot

Part 1

On an ordinary morning, Kim is the one to open the door when someone rings the doorbell of the apartment she shares with Jenny Everywhere, and is unsurprised to find that the visitor is none other than another incarnation of the Shifter, a Disney Princess-like Jenny going by the name of Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere, complete with a raccoon sidekick. Genevieve explains that she has been journeying in a dream spinner to find a wizard who can turn her companion and romantic interest Prince Guy back into a human being following his transformation into a talking pig by a witch — but her dream spinner broke down on the way, leaving her stranded in this universe.

Part 2

Kim and Jenny head to the parking lot with Genevieve and the raccoon, whom she soon introduces as her lady-in-waiting Willow. They find the dream spinner being tended to by Willow's brother Wu, and blocking the drive-way just as another friend of Jenny's and resident of the apartment building, David Lowe, is driving in. After managing to park, David gives Kim a package he collected on her behalf at the butcher's and they both head inside while Wu explains to the two Jennies that he cannot repair the dream spinner himself and would need the help of “an artificer”. Without missing a beat, the local Jenny goes knock at the door of yet another one of her neighbours — teenage genius Eric, alias Professor Awesome!

Part 3

After selecting the right tools, Jenny and Eric head back to the parking lot to find Kim back. Kim is curious as to why Eric isn't at school, and he and Jenny explain that he was sent home early for bringing dozens of live trilobites to school for science class (having collected them from a parallel world with Jenny's own help). Examining the dream spinner, Eric readily identifies the issue, proving more familiar with how dimensional shift engines than even Jenny thought he was; he promises that he can fix it in fifteen minutes with a Dremel tool.

Part 4

Kim and Professor Awesome successfully repair or replace the dream spinner's mechanical parts, with Wu's help (discussing the “multi-Shifter event” as they work); however, they are dumbfounded by the magical elements of the contraption. They get to discussing what wizards they could contact if necessary, but Willow soon reports that the runes are in working order already, meaning Genevieve and her party are all set. Jenny cheerfully notes that she has a few hours free before she's set to see an Anorak Boys performance to review it.

Worldbuilding

Jenny Everywhere

  • The Jenny with whom the story opens the version previously seen in Parallax, Camera Shy and Paying It Forward.
  • Also prominently featured is Genevieve, Princess of Everywhere, as previously seen in Paying It Forward. She arrives on Jenny and Kim's doorstep “wearing an improbably pink and frilly dress” with a matching lace ruffle; she wears “a tiara set with crystals, glinting even in indoor light”, and has as a side-kick a raccoon wearing a doublet. She has a certain Prince Guy as a companion and as a love interest, although she is unsure whether he is “her true love” precisely. It is revealed that she travels through the realms using a device called dream spinner, rather than shifting through her own powers.

Universes

  • The story's main Jenny lives in one universe, and Genevieve is native to another; although magic is more common-place in the latter, it is mentioned that there is a wizard who lives in the same building that houses the modern-day Jenny's apartment.
  • Shortly before the events of the story, Jenny took Eric to a universe where large populations of trilobites, some of them terrestrial, survive into the modern day.

Other

Continuity

Behind the scenes

Background

Professor Awesome's schoolteacher is named Mr Hernandez, in reference to Alex Hernandez, a prolific writer of early Jenny Everywhere comic stories. The Moriarty guides are named in reference to the screen handle of Steven Wintle on the Barbelith forum.

Read online

The story is available on the author's website.