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 “''…the lost heir to the Lizard Kingdoms…''”
-What? Okay, I get it that this was a problem but Lizard Kingdoms? Mole People? Jenny, what did you get yourself into?
+What? Okay, I get it that this was a problem but Lizard Kingdoms? Mole People? Jenny, what did you get yourself into this time?
 “''Later on, look up a thing called the secretary problem.''”
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 “''…some women are happy to stay up late perusing a map of Tasmania…''”
-It seems Kim listens to [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-GQ63NStxk Amanda Palmer songs]. She also uses an [https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnusualEuphemism unusual euphemism] which probably flew by unnoticed.
+It seems Kim listens to [https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s-GQ63NStxk Amanda Palmer songs]. She also uses an [https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/UnusualEuphemism unusual euphemism] which hopefully flew by without being understood.
 “''…remember that European reporter kid?''”